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Moving through the perfection
From a distance so deep
The pleasure is almost lost
In seamless, cloudless
Granite gray skies
And your eyes
Blunted by uncertainty
Alight with anticipation
Watered by wind
Raining, fading color
Echoing the overcast.

Upon these abandoned streets
Swept clean by late afternoon
Within these wild crosswinds
Blurring the winter white sun
I am the ghost of mourning
The promise of old pain
Losing distinction
In your smile.

Offering a warmth so compelling
A phoenix risen from the ashes
Of long burnt bridges
Lies two empty lanes away
Beyond stagnant shadows
In sunken doorways
It beacons
With subtle gestures
Eternally, hauntingly, audibly
Whispering through
The wailing wind.

Share this glance for a moment
Accept this silent offer
Of surrogate sunshine
Accept the invitation
Of this secret smile
Grasp this proffered hand
I will lead you through
What might have never been
The threat of storms
Over shifting seasons
Into the quiet calm
Of candlelight.

Within this room shadows dance
To the somber flow of firelight
Born in this moment, in your eyes
Rising above me
Lost in the scent of your hair
Falling in waves
Auburn oceans caressing
The supple shoulders
Of spring.



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:iconsummerdies:
About last weekend.
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:iconrebelchic:
"In seamless, cloudless
Granite gray skies
And your eyes
Blunted by uncertainty
Alight with anticipation
Watered by wind
Raining, fading color
Echoing the overcast."


:cries:

brilliant once again.
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:iconeternityforgotten:
so beautiful and touching...
with a very effective ending
lovely word choices and imagery
this is... simply beautiful :) (Smile)

a pleasure to read, thank u so much for sharing
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:iconlorelaiv:
I think this poem goes under the instant fav category!!
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I ride wild storms all through the night,
Dark, hear my call, obey my might...
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:iconfae13:
'Accept this silent offer
Of surrogate sunshine
Accept the invitation
Of this secret smile
Grasp this proffered hand
I will lead you through
What might have never been ...'


brilliant. your words, forever honest, tug at the heart.
i identify with this.
well done!

-fae
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:icondismarum:
I've told you that you always write so well...

In all honesty, one of the most enjoyable to read poets on DA, imho.

You have such a way with words that just flow over me...great imagery and everything is loaded and layered with nuances of emotion...


The first stanza drew me in like nothing else...

Lovely!


-Dismarum-
~I just want to be real...~
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:iconjsenn:
This is a beautiful poem. Spunj13 says it is full of melancholy, then there is an aspect of it which is not so sad. I think that also. Truly there is melancholy, then there is life. It gets entwined with the melancholy, twirls around it and brings one back to love's tactile sensation. I don't know how old you are, but there is a wisdom here born, it seems, in the "living" of life. (it isn't easy to see death and understand it's purpose, or pattern in life.)
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jHeart y
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:iconmadspeed:
Amazing, impressive work that moves.
Great job!

-B.
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:iconngnd25:
~ngnd25 Apr 1, 2002   Writer
A very well written poem. The words seem to dance.

ngnd25
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:iconnovacaine:
I have read this one 2 times now and each time it hits me anew. This is a very beautiful poem. Most definitely going in my favorites. :) (Smile)
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